Convergent boundary peer feed back

1/3/2012

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6 Comments
Conan
1/3/2012 08:45:49 am

Hi! You need to move Convergent Boundaries, Divergent Boundaries and Transform Boundaries sections seperatly.

Grammar: Perfect!

Inforamtion: Try to put the imformations into your OWN WORDS. YOU'RE OWN WORDS! Also, you need to put Oceanic-Oceanic Convergence, Oceanic-Continental Convergence and Continental-Continental Convergence. Finally, try to use more simple words.
("interior" is one of them.)

Spelling:No Spelling errors
:)

Capital: For "where the oceanic Nazca Plate is crashing into the continent of South America." sentence, capitalize 'Oceanic'.

Punctuation: No errors ;)

Media: Try to put good images for each Boundary sections. Also, change the image because it doesn't clearly shows me. The image is not describing the Convergent Boundaries. Also, put more better video.

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cat
1/4/2012 07:32:06 am

thanks ill be sure to fix it

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sandy squirrel
1/3/2012 12:52:49 pm

Grammar- No errors

Information- All of the information is not in your own words! You need to put it in your own words, because if you do not you are copying someone else's work! Also you need to put the three types of Convergent boundaries!

Spelling- There is no spelling errors!

Capitals- Capitalize "Oceanic". Great job other than that!

Media- It is not that interesting reading a thick novel with no pictures, and that is what is happening here. Try to add some more exciting pictures and maybe even its own video!

All in all, great job! :D

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cat
1/4/2012 07:32:34 am

thanks :)

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Pooh Bear
1/3/2012 02:10:48 pm

Grammar-
Your grammar had no mistakes.

Information-
All the information you had was not in your own words. You had just copied it right down and claimed it as your work! You also didn't mention what the three types of convergent boundaries are. So I suggest you change that.

Spelling-
There were no spelling mistakes at all!

Punctuation-
I didn't see many punctuation errors!

Media-
There were no pictures what so ever and no video.

Tip: I really think you could work on this part a bit more but that dose not mean you did a great job. And remember always put stuff in your own words! :)
But anyway you did a good job!!

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cat
1/4/2012 07:32:58 am

ill change it thanks :)

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